Moriah Leila

So I am definitely interested in this piece. Clones? That's pretty cool. I'm not too good in certain areas of writing like grammar, so my main focus is going to ...

I really have very little to add. You are an amazing writer. I was reading this and thinking, you've got to publish this, because it is just so captivating. You ...

This made me so happy! I just wanted to shout, "AWESOME!" But I restrained myself. It was a struggle. Anyways, I have an awesome review for you and hopefully my ...

Yeah!! I'm so excited about reviewing this piece. I really enjoyed reading it and definitely want to read more. So, I am going to be brutally honest and a little ...

I found this piece completely by chance and I loved the plot idea so much I just had to review it. I really like this piece, it has major potential. ...

Flashes of troubling memories often flit in and out of my dreams; memories that I try hard to forget. In these I relive the worst moments of my childhood. [s]I ...

I know you wanted a review from me, but it's hard for me to critique your work. I really enjoyed reading this piece. I liked the pov and tone of ...

Okay, so I don't have too much to add to what has already been said. I'd like to suggest you do spell check everything before you post it, because most ...

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you with this review. I have a few nitpicks, but most everyone has already covered what I was going to ...

I really like this piece, I think the plot is terrific. As for critiques I just have some nitpicky stuff. I wish I had known about YWS when I was ...

Okay, so to be honest, your story moves so quickly, changes perspective so rapidly, and leaves so many questions at the end that it is very hard to comprehend what ...

This isn't the end is it? There is still more, right? Because I have a ton of unanswered questions and it seems like Becca has officially lost it. This isn't ...

I just have one critique. I didn’t want to, but I knew it had to be said[s], done[/s]. That's it! Well done! I am really enjoying the twists and turns ...

I've read all the chapters up to this one and have had a hard time to find anything to critique. This chapter is just as good as the previous ones, ...

GAH! My hands are shaking! I'm sorry, I'd love to critique this piece, but I just can't! Your characters are so real, and the imagery you paint so strong I ...